Not entirely sure why you don't have more reviews, but this is aff.net. No in-depth story's entirely required here; the requirements involve smut, characterization, and decent delivery on the writing field. You excelled in all three. The characters were fairly true to what I'd imagine Adult Swim versions of them would be like, the sexuality and the way you wrote was fantastic. This was a very swell piece of entertainment. Thanks, and I hope you update.
It was a little hard to follow how the three were positioned at times but I think that's a problem for every erotic fanfiction. You really managed to convey how the characters, especially Toph, felt during the sex scene. Great use of language too.
I gotta say, that was one of the most well-written fictions I've read on this site. Ever. The perfect balance of fluff, lemon, and IC. Threesomes aren't easy to do, especially if you are trying to leave the characters with any integrity. but you pulled it off wonderfully. I only wish my story had such a good balance of plot and sex... as is right now, It's only the former!
but anyway, great work, and I would most assuredly read a continuation of this story-- or anything else you choose to write!
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