Why has no one else reviewed? Am I the only one brave enough to tell you that, besides the fact that I disliked the whole idea of Zuko getting banged by his Uncle, I read it anyway, and enjoyed it as a first-timer of this pairing? And can I just say...
DATE RAPE DRUGS. YEEEEY. 8D How come nothing like this ever happens to me? Ah, then again...maybe it has and I don't remember. What a pity.
xD
No, but seriously. I rated this 4 out of 5 for one reason: the story was too short. It was more like a PWP than an actual story. I would have like to read some more paragraphs of the actual affection and lust factor, and maybe some background rather than, 'Zuko drinks drugged tea, goes to masturbate, and ends up being sexed up by his horny Uncle.' Just seemed too rushed. I think you could do a lot more with it to make it more enthralling.
Still, I liked it. The concept is still odd and a tad grimace-worthy just because I see his Uncle as his father figure, but hey....that's just my opinion.
this was one of my first stories that i wrote when i was getting into writing fanfiction.
Thank you for the compliments and i'm sorry it was so short. i seem to write PWP's the best but i have attempted some little plot ones. my bigger plot ones are still underway and they are all originals stories so i prolly won't post them for a long while if ever.
Whoa! hell of a ride, hehe... i love it, tough it was a little too short.
today i was struck by the need of reading stories of these two and i stumbled with this one... i'm so glad for that. Good work.
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