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amdrag 2009-09-30 id # 3000034479
An actual story? Here? Who would've thunk it?

Obviously, I'm surprised. Make that pleasantly surprised. I'm really excited to see where you go with all of this. Great work.
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Jawelik 2009-10-01 id # 3000034499
Nice story. I have a thing for eager and aggressive girls, so I quite enjoyed the scene in the first chapter. You also took the story after that exactly where I hoped it would go, with Kim finding out, and Ron dealing with the aftermath. I'm enjoying it much and look forward to your next update.

-Jawelik
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Allence 2009-10-08 id # 3000034552
I like this story, I've had fun reading it.
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Nathanal Wilkes 2009-10-09 id # 3000034554
Hey been a while since I've been to the site, but your story caught my attention and it is awsome. Not a huge fan of the young girl stuff, but I like how you did it anime style, making the young girl the aggressor. Also glad you did go the route of making an actual and believable fallout to things as well. Don't get me wrong I like the whole random sex thing from time to time, but I like the story aspect you have going here. Also the fact that you don't have Ron completely on the wayside when people talk about him. I'm a Ron fan like to see him be the player every once in a while (reluctant is better than d-bag). Just saying glad that Ron wasn't forgotten as Kim went on some lesbian escapade or seen as asshole by everyone and treated like crap, or offed himself. Anywho sorry bout the rant there, but awsome, AWSOME, story and I hope you can find time to update soon.
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Muzzlehatch 2009-10-14 id # 3000034581
Excellent story, Eoraptor! Anxious for the next installment.
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Kael 2009-10-15 id # 3000034595
I know this sight is mostly about smutt but Im realy hopeing for a story chapter (aka with Ron or Kim because there interesting charictors and ofcorse theres the posabilaty of the thought of RKMS relationship which is realy interesting
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Muzzlehatch 2009-10-15 id # 3000034596
DarkDannyPhantom did a picture of Zita and Felix in this situation. I think that it's in WWOEC.
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Nathanal Wilkes 2009-10-19 id # 3000034619
Nice one I must admit you have a knack for the "lemon" scene. That was another goodun.
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NarutosBrat 2009-11-10 id # 3000034762
I completely agree with Monique. Shego mentioned that Kim was lucky that someone hadn't gone after him sooner. I think that if Yori had been the one that had seduced him instead of Joss, she could have pulled off the coup. The fact that she's a ninja means that she has the cunning it would take to make a serious go of it.

By the way, Shego and monique...extra hot pairing.
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Christopher 2012-08-09 id # 3000039703
All of this could be avoided with the dismissal of the 'one and only love' bullshit. It's been a lie for centuries and it will always be a lie. Best thing for men AND women to do: don't lock yourself to any one partner.
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